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fallen

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Her skin pale, taut, torn,
Her eyes cast at the mournful moon.
'How long,' She whispers,
Since the day bled out? Since
She'd been alone in the moonlight?
Broken wings folded neatly, she stood.
Bare feet on broken glass, blood
On the cold stone floor.
She looks up again, the shattered roof
Of the abandoned church.
The young priest shudders.
His words lose all meaning, fading
Into the echoes of her whimpers.
A thousand questions voiced at once.

She turns her head, black hair and lace
Falling gracefully around her pale face. With
A single tear drop of crimson blood.
She touches the place her wings once were.
'I...' Her words choke her. How long untill
She can fly again, laugh again, love again?
'I have fallen!' She hangs her head. Another tear.
A thousand discarded feathers mark her path to earth.
A thousand era's to death...
I've never written a poem before :)

im not sure... but i think it's about a fallen angel.

I don't do this often :]

well constructive critisism is always welcome...

so comment and ect. Please read it though lol

I wish i had a pretty picture to go with this lol
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KellyCrane's avatar
A pretty picture is unnecessary to go with this poem: the imagery of the poem projects pictures in the mind (I'm sure you've heard that before). In my minds eye I see this unfortunate, once divine being, having fallen, fallen; has it in fact taken her thousands of lifetimes--even ages? to reach the very bottom whence she's fallen? Her empyrial splendor--her wings--now in tatters, her raven hair once smooth and shiny, now flat, damp, matted. Has she in fact fallen from a time-length thousands of years away? Is our planet that far from what was erst her home? Her spirits have fallen the same length. Is our world her destination? Is our world indeed Hell? It must be for her. And the priest? Powerless to help. . . .